Thursday, September 18, 2014

3 people for a hot beverage

If I had 3 over for a hot beverage I would invite Neil Armstrong, Buzz Aldrin, and Michael Collins. We would talk about the space race and what it felt like to be the first men in space and walk the moon.We would drink hot chocolate with mini marshmallows.

4 comments:

  1. Could be a bit longer. Could have explained other stuff you would have talked about.

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  2. Missing some punctuation, just a few commas though. There's also a mysterious double space between "walk" and "the".

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  3. It was pretty short but I like the idea of having the first three people on the moon all together.

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